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Harker

(16,745 posts)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:17 AM Nov 2020

A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you.

no fun here

the woods are silent

crows move on

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A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you. (Original Post) Harker Nov 2020 OP
Lovely MLAA Nov 2020 #1
They'll be back Harker Nov 2020 #2
You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂 MLAA Nov 2020 #3
You're very kind to say so. Thank you. Harker Nov 2020 #4
so ... lillypaddle Nov 2020 #5
A Luna lune... love it! Harker Nov 2020 #6
You do your research lillypaddle Nov 2020 #8
I'm not sure. Harker Nov 2020 #9
I have to think about that one lillypaddle Nov 2020 #10
And... Harker Nov 2020 #7

MLAA

(19,415 posts)
3. You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:33 AM
Nov 2020

Harker

(16,745 posts)
4. You're very kind to say so. Thank you.
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:42 AM
Nov 2020

Rather than viewing the form as limiting, I find the distillation process to broaden my way of experiencing the world.

lillypaddle

(9,605 posts)
5. so ...
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:15 PM
Nov 2020

moon shimmers

the light is still there

though shadowed

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It's much harder than I thought to write a lune. Too many thoughts, not enough syllables or lines.

Harker

(16,745 posts)
6. A Luna lune... love it!
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:21 PM
Nov 2020

Keep it up, sensei, and you'll be thinking them with little or no effort.

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