I wrote a James Bond/Peter Gunn genre song about Charles Koch. Can I get feedback? [View all]

It's about a fictional global warming villain, but it was inspired by the Koch brothers.

I'd love to get artistic feedback!!

Listen to Tears of Acid Rain by Larry Levin 1 on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/JMY3u

There’s a man who’s burning the earth
For a plot that he’s plotting
He thinks the fast rising seas
Will be fun for yachting
And when he looks at the trees
He feels greed for lumber
All he wants is the world
And it’s his for the plunder

And he cries tears of acid rain
And he bleeds crude oil from his veins
He’s the man who’s burning coal
Where there used to be a soul

There’s a man who’s burning the earth
And you’re his next victim
Loves a disease he believes
And you’re but a symptom
He’ll bleed you dry, and then fly away
As your heart is breaking
All he wants is the world
And it’s his for the taking

And he cries tears of acid rain
And he bleeds crude oil from his veins
He’s the man who’s burning coal
Where there used to be a soul

When all is smashed and destroyed
He’ll be in his rocket
His plan is being deployed
And not a man can stop it
Of course, someone will try
But there are a million ways to die

And he cries tears of acid rain
And he bleeds crude oil from his veins
He’s the man who’s burning coal
Where there used to be a soul

He’s the man who’s burning coal
Where there used to be a soul