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bobbieinok

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Thu Jul 16, 2020, 12:46 PM

Jul 2020

The first 2 lines just sorta 'appeared'. Had to spend bit of time, effort on rest

I 'm not a poetry writer by any means. But this morning these words just seemed 'right.'

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Need a place to put this down, maybe get reaction [View all] bobbieinok Jul 2020 OP

Very nicely done! SheltieLover Jul 2020 #1

I like it 🙂 MLAA Jul 2020 #2

Thank you for those verses, bobbieinok. +++ pdxflyboy Jul 2020 #3

Thank you for responses bobbieinok Jul 2020 #4

Nice rhythm, balance and imagery, and... Amy-Strange Jul 2020 #5